Research Question:
Should the practice of cloning be banned?
Precise claim:
Cloning should not be banned.
Reasons/blueprint:
1- Cloning may hold the key to the discovery of the nature of fatal diseases, cure them, prevent them, and extinguish them.
2- Cloning is beneficial for animal production, and for preventing animal species from extinction.
Complete thesis statement:
The practice of cloning should not be banned because it may hold the key to the discovery of the nature of fatal diseases, cure them, prevent them, and extinguish them; as well as benefiting animal production, and preventing animal species from extinction, therefore doing key work for the conservation of ourselves and of our planet.
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great thesis statement! Instead of saying should not say "it's not" it will make it stronger!
ReplyDeleteVery strong thesis statement good job.
ReplyDeletevery well organized and structured. The complete thesis statement, I think, covered all the bases a thesis statement should cover. well done!
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